Rough Draft

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    • Kexin Zheng
    • March 11th, 2011

    When I saw this poster, I immediately fell in love with this design! I love how the pony tails form a heart shape in the center, which echoes the logo at the bottom. Also, I like the typeface you chose, it is both very playful and fashionable.
    Maybe you could try to incorporate the actual logo inside the hair? The two hearts seem a little repetitive and I would like to see them put together in a creative way.
    Nice job and great concept!!

  1. This is an awesome poster idea. I love the shape the hair makes and I think the hierarchy is very good. There is a lot of text at the bottom which isn’t a problem, but maybe you could make it smaller or something? Just an idea, it doesn’t bother me that much. Very cool!

    • gabriellarello
    • March 14th, 2011

    I love how the poster came out. I like how you balance the text at the bottom by off-setting the second line of text on the top. It looks really neat and I instantly understood what the poster was for.

  2. I really like this poster because of how you played off the shape of the ponytails. It seems like if might be a little wordy but other than that it looks great

  3. this is so creative!! i love the concept!!! my only critique would be trying another typeface on the locks for love.

  4. This is so cute! I love how you used ponytails to form a heart. However, it might be nicer with a different typeface.

    • Malory Wheaton
    • March 21st, 2011

    I love this! The use of negative space to make a heart combines the idea of the charity organization using such simplicity. I might move the logo to the right hand corner, however, it would really open up the poster in the left hand corner and give the image some room to breathe.

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