Rough Draft

-Jillian Marom

    • gra217student
    • March 19th, 2011

    Love the color scheme… I think the contrast is great between the orange and yellows… I think the phrase is not catchy enough and could maybe be condensed to be a quicker read
    – Elizabeth Schoenbach

    • Jaime Manela
    • March 19th, 2011

    I really like this poster. The tagline really grabs my attention and is really creative. Only critiques I have would be to maybe select another photos/redo the pen tool – it looks like the child’s left leg is missing and try to eliminate the white space at the bottom (convert logo to black and white?). It also might be cute if you make the word “sun” big and yellow as well because it does rhyme with run and fun.

    Well done!

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